Nothing gets my undies in a twist more than a mission statement that reads like Gone with the Wind or quite the opposite, makes no statement! Take this one for example:
“…the primary mission of the agency is to provide effective, high quality intervention and prevention services to targeted low to moderate-income families who are experiencing problems associated with substance abuse, teen pregnancy, infant mortality/morbidity, physical health and child abuse. The agency’s philosophy is to provide a holistic and comprehensive approach to improved psychosocial and physical functioning through outreach, intervention and prevention services.”.
Alrighty now! If the purpose of the mission statement is to inspire action, this one certainly ranks as the death march. The wording is so full of psycho-social babble that no person would want to take up the charge. Who would join this mission?
The mission statement should be one sentence, and worded such that anyone in the company can memorize it. It should certainly inform all why the company exists and should definitely inspire all to action.
Challenge: How would you re-write the above statement?
